TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 09
Workraw: PhotoKano 09.mkv

17
For some regrettable reason,
For some reason,
{regrettable is unneeded in translation}

35
If you don't show them to anyone, I'll do it.
If you don't show them to anyone, I'll don't really mind trying.
{maybe this sounds a bit more nicer in translation}
{you could remove the trying there}


104
You're probably thinking: "Niimi-san, you're good at sewing.
Niimi-san, you're good at sewing.
105
It feels very girl-like... I think.
It feels very girl-like," aren't you?
{She thinks that this is currently in the mind of Maeda}

142
I've loved you ever since middle school.
I've liked you ever since middle school.
{I think liking works better here in this specific sentence}

150
I want to know what it is about me that's not good enough!{I want you to say where I'm not good enough for you!}
Please tell me what I'm lacking!
{this is better phrasing. She does say "I'd like you to tell me" as written in the acolades}

151
Not good enough...
What you're lacking...
{a fix when 150 is applied)

215
It suits you.{Eh, I dono, I don't think they drew it very well in these scenes}
It suits you really well.
{sugoku}

248 mistimed
That next semester...{The second semester.}
{"soshite nigakki"}
249
Her riseball was just one step from perfection.
{has the timing for both 248 and 249}


329 mistime
In middle school I met you and started talking with you.
{chuugaku no toki dattsun to deatte hanasuyou ni natte}
330
I was interested in you, and I was always looking at you.
{dattsun no koto ga ki ni natte, zutto zutto dattsun no koto wo mitsumeteta}

351
A still growing rhythmic gymnastic angel pursuing beauty through her dancing.{its literally her limbs, but its more like what she does with them}{tlc please, esp. the 伸びきらぬ -Believe this is in regards to her striving to be better}
A rhythmic gymnastic angel pursuing beauty with her flexible arms and legs.
{This is the actual translation. nobikiru means something is stretched so much that it lost its elasticity, but this is negative case == thus flexible}
{teashi still just being arms and legs in this case now}

353
Bust {development}, no indication of likely future development.
Bust is developing, but no sign of actually growing in size.
{I'd write it this way}